Influences: my first reader



My first reader was a man called Fergus. A friend of a flatmate at university, I never got to know him well. But it’s possible he changed my life.

I have no idea where he is now. Perhaps he is an investment banker. Or a spy. (I have at least three close friends who are spies.)

I liked Fergus immediately. He didn’t look like other students. He wore brogues and navy blue Guernsey jumpers. He lived in a basement somewhere off the Edgware Road. And he cycled. Everywhere.

I’m not really sure how we got around to talking about poetry. I suspect my loquacious flatmate introduced me as a poet before I could open my mouth to protest. Nevertheless, this was enough for Fergus. He took the idea seriously. Somewhere in the margins of a chaotic dinner party at his flat (the first time I had eaten snails) he took me aside and asked to see some of my poems. ‘And maybe you could look over some of mine?’ he said.

I sent him a bundle of handwritten poems in the post, as you did in those days. I found the exercise terrifying but useful. Copying them out for another human’s eyes made me pay attention to my previously-overlooked verboseness.

Of course, I heard nothing back from him.

What felt like several months later we found ourselves on a cliff-top in Cornwall, the guests of another friend of a flatmate. It was the run up to Christmas, very much out of season. Seagulls mewed unenthusiastically in the mizzle. A cable of red and green light bulbs wavered over the high street. It was furiously dark.

After walking for what felt like three hours, Fergus finally spoke. ‘You like to pack them all in,’ he said.

‘I’m sorry?’

‘Your allusions.’

‘Fergus, I’m sorry: what are you talking about?’

‘They’re very dense.’

‘What are?’

‘Your poems. Brilliant. All packed in. I wonder if you . . .’


‘If you might . . .’

‘Might what?’

‘You know . . . if you could . . .’

‘Could what?’

He stopped and turned to me. ‘They’re brilliant, you know. You have to keep writing. That’s the main thing.’ He set off again, and said over his shoulder ‘That’s it.’

And that was it. I never did find out what he thought I could do to my poems.

But the main point had been made. That he liked them, that I might consider doing something with them, and that I should keep going.  Not much, you might think.

But it was enough. Enough to go on writing my rubbish, allusion-packed dense little poems, that definitely needed something to be done with them.

Since that moment on that Cornish cliff-top I have been lucky to have many brilliant, kind and insightful readers: Peter Carpenter, Naomi Jaffa, Michael Laskey, Joanna Cutts, Peter Sansom, and Jean Sprackland, not to mention the cornucopia of talent that was the South West Writers group. I don’t know what would have happened if I had not met Fergus. The chances are I would have carried on anyway. But in his rather inchoate way, he did what no one else had done before, and affirmed that the project was worth bothering with.

Inconclusive though the experience was, and faltering though his words were, his words, and the kindness behind them managed to be both healing and expansive. As Billy Collins has said: ‘I cannot tell you/how vastly my loneliness was deepened,/how poignant and amplified the world before me seemed’.

We all need to find a Fergus.



  1. This post resonated with me. I feel so fortunate to have the support and encouragement of a Fergus. This has come to be a reciprocal arrangement which I believe entitles me to be classed as a Fergie.

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  2. You’ve been lucky to have a Fergus, and I like that you recognize him, even though, like you say, you would have probably done the same with your writing. Still he was there, and the fact that you didn’t forget him means that he did count. Even if all writers don’t get to have a Fergus I’d be happy to be one for a writer.


  3. you kind of put into words how I feel about the people who encouraged me to continue with the Mardon Art café when I felt there was no point in it all……

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