The Holiday Inn
Northerners. But honest.
Him, hands like shovels,
his eyes brimming and fish-flick.
And her, well.
You get used to not asking.
Any space at all they said.
We’ll take anything.
I gave them the shed
after getting a roasting
for looking a gift horse
in a recession.
A booking’s not what it was.
It’s where I keep the Triumph.
My baby.
I couldn’t help wondering
where I’d put the WD40.
I saw his head crowning,
then there he was,
bruised, not an inch of pink on him.
She never took her eyes off him once.
The sky lit up like Christmas
suddenly – a police chopper
looking for insurgents
some said, or a nutter.
I lost the booking slip in the end.
Got roasted for that, too.
Might have fetched a fortune.
Paperwork was never my strong suit.
This is beautiful.
Thank you for all your posts but thank you for this one in particular.
Wishing you and your family a safe and happy holiday.
Tracy T
Sent from mission control
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Hello Tracy at Mission Control
Thanks so much for your kind comment.
You might also be interested in looking at Joseph, here: https://anthonywilsonpoetry.com/2013/12/01/advent-poem-1-joseph/
Next up is Mary.
As ever with best wishes
Anthony
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This says so much about ‘us’, and is so moving inspite, and because of, its cynical and witty pragmatism. Thanks 🙂
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Thank you so much for saying so. I appreciate it enormously, and your kind RT.
I loved your Arvon post.
You might enjoy my Joseph piece here: https://anthonywilsonpoetry.com/2013/12/01/advent-poem-1-joseph/
Next up is Mary.
With best wishes and thanks
Anthony
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Really great poem.
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Thank you so much.
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Love it.
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Thank you!
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In the most colloquial of phrases, I can only say “Wow!” This is a knockout of a poem. Thanks so much for it.
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Thank you for saying so!
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Thank you!
You are kind to say so.
You can find Joseph here: https://anthonywilsonpoetry.com/2013/12/01/advent-poem-1-joseph/
Next up is Mary.
With good wishes
Anthony
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I love this poem. It is so real. Different voices-real perspectives-truths told!
Lovely.
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Thank you for saying so Fiona.
Here is Joseph:https://anthonywilsonpoetry.com/2013/12/01/advent-poem-1-joseph/
Next up is Mary.
All good wishes as ever
Anthony
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Great poem. I love the curtness of those short phrases and end-stopped lines. Funny, poignant (sorry about the review cliches), and the shed option is bang up-to-date.
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Thank you so much Fiona. High praise. I appreciate it. Yours for the Rialto if you want it. I had to say that. All best and many thanks Anthony
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Ha! Was not speaking with my Rialto hat on. *Puts on hat* Poems are always welcome at the Rialto, including yours!
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I know…I was being cheeky, forgive me. No prizes for guessing what’s heading your way in the post. A
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